Good draft - question 5 is missing?
1 - pics are great. Comments need work - no sense of c and cs. Ie technical areas linked to purpose (intro character/ location and genre) limited analysis - descriptive and vague.
2 - analysis is generally good - some of this could be moved to question 1. Minimal sense of rep social groups of people. Think gender/age/class. You explore rep of atmosphere etc. not the question.
3 - great ideas. Get rid of the other tabs you are not using. Comp to film on their label. What about other avenues of distribution that will build revenue? Think AS exam. Use the data you already have on your thor blogs.
4 - great. Embed the prezi.
5 - missing.
6 - clip won't open. Link to presentation needs login. Let me know when you have sorted this after Easter if you want feedback.
7 - fine. What about what you learnt about sound and editing? Could be more detailed.
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